Snatches my mind
Wandering words
Catch wispy poetry
The elusive poem
Comes neither from
Within or Without
But from someplace
In Between
Where Creativity
Lives
As if outside of
Myself
But yet part of
Myself
It dreams big
And lands on
Pixel paradigms
Creativity
Grasping for Life
Finds me and
Connects
The vessel to its
Birth
[one single impression . elusive]
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22 wandering stars:
Neat!
Can I get the chord progression that accompanies these words?
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Hi Floreta, been missing you. :-)
My favorites here,
"It dreams big
And lands on
Pixel paradigms."
You are very, very, clever (and creative!). My little ditty today fits your,
"Within or Without
But from someplace
In Between."
My 'in between' was gone, so I settled for writing yesterday and tomorrow.
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I too sometimes wonder where the words come from. Nice.
hmmm . . .
it moves, does it not?
:-0
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.ero
nice to see u still writing
and neat to see u are going to india i'd love to do some volunteer work abroad somewhere and wish you a lovely week and lots inspiration
<3
Enjoyable read.
Wow, a great one :D
That birth in the end was unexpected. What do you wanna say with that? :)
writers and poets suffer like that, but should we consider it as something normal from the ordinary?
i love your take on the prompt Floreta...:)
great look into the elusive nature of creativity and the quality of the creative process.
peace,
jp/deb
I love being raped by creativity. I enjoyed reading this.
Creativity is elusive. But it finds us and assists our birth....
Excellent use of the prompt. Your poem sings.
I really like this one! Lovely and totally accurate :)
there you have it, what eludes us all at one time or another. Nice job!
I enjoyed your poem and these lines:
As if outside of
Myself
But yet part of
Myself
wonderful
crisp.
intelligent thought process..
really good one..
Floreta, your talent and CREATIVITY never cease to amaze me.
Beautifully done hun.
it is a rebirth every time both for the writer and the reader! A beautiful introspective poem.
introspective elusive poem! :)
good one!
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